Student Activity 2 (Page 25)
“Identify and comment on the figurative language within the context of the extract.”
The opening to the extract from “The Picture of Dorian Gray” uses figurative language to portray an instant in which the young Dorian begins to understand the “brevity” of youth. As he inspects the portrait of himself that his friend Basil Hallward has painted for him, at first he is pleased. His cheeks “flush” and a look of “joy came into his eyes”. The word flush normally describes how something is filled or drained, and in this case is used to figuratively describe how the “look of joy” was visible to those around him. Dorian, however, gradually is saddened to think that the youth which he possesses, and which has been captured in this painting, will soon be lost to him. He begins to think of the effects that time will have on his mortal body and yet not on the painting. Oscar Wilde dramatizes these woes, and helps us to understand them better by personifying the effects of time that Dorian fears. He fears that his figure will be “broken”, “his eyes dim”, “the scarlet pass from his lips”, and “the gold steal from his hair”. In effect, Dorian not only feels the ‘thievery’ of his youth to be depressing, but also to be unfair. The painting, then, both saddens him and causes him to feel bitter, which in the story are some of the first ‘unwholesome’ feelings he has harbored. Thus begins his transmogrification into a being who manages to maintain his outward youthfulness, but inwardly ages his conscience.
Oscar Wilde unfolds this saga with sensory detail imagery, describing how Dorian’s emotions are suddenly awoken to the uncertain prospects of the future. It frightens him, and he feels a pain, “like a knife”. This simile, as well as the figurative “hand of ice” which Dorian feels being laid upon his heart, further demonstrate how Dorian is being impacted by the painting. The experience is a metaphor to show the reader how the true sign of age is not what we can detect on the outside, or in a mirror (as with Dorian comparing himself to the portrait), but that aging is that which we feel within ourselves, in our emotional core, and conscience.
Dorian’s metamorphosis is interrupted by Hallward’s aporia, “Don’t you like it?” Hallward cannot understand Dorian’s reaction to his work. As much as he has tried to capture the inner being of his subject, Basil Hallward is a person who is very much focused on the external. Outward beauty is what demands his attention, and he strives to preserve it. Lord Henry interrupts him, however, by affirming, “Of course he likes it”. His goal is to limit Basil’s impact on the boy and he rebuffs any further ‘meddling’ on Hallward’s part with the rhetorical question, “Who wouldn’t like it”. Lord Henry senses the impact that the painting has already had on Dorian Gray. His mind is intensely aware of the inward workings of man, in a sense he is the exact opposite of Basil. The two represent the contrasting forces at work within Dorian at this present moment; the part which wants to focus on the external, enjoy life’s bliss, and be care-free, and the other which wants to unearth the inward strengths, possibilities, and dreams in the young man. Lord Henry effectively wins the fight by answering his own rhetorical question with a superlative, “It’s the greatest thing in modern art,” he says.
Lord Henry, at first, wishes to buy the painting so that he can always keep it near Dorian and remind him of the “revelation” he has just experienced. It is part of his scheme to keep Dorian thinking inwardly, and thereby gain an ally. He is even more pleased when Basil tells him that the painting belongs to Dorian. Says Lord Henry, “He’s a very lucky fellow”.
“How sad it is!” is Dorian’s reply, a paradox to what Lord Henry has just stated. By this we learn that although the picture of Dorian Gray is a gift for him, it is also a curse; as is the case with the eternal youth which he inadvertently acquires. This sad fact is a commiseration, another form of figurative language, for the reader.
The usage of figurative language could not be better suited to this particular story. The essence of figurative language is that it draws comparisons between the literal and ‘intended’ or ‘figurative’ meaning of a word or sentence, and wields both in order to craft a story, or intention for the reader to interpret. The story of Dorian Gray is similar. The characters of Basil and Lord Henry in this excerpt each vie to be Dorian’s ‘mentor’. His decision to look inwardly, at his ‘metaphorical’ and ‘figurative’ qualities is what declares Lord Henry the champion.
b) “Comment on the structure of the text.”
In the extract from “The Picture of Dorian Gray,” the author uses punctuation and grammar to achieve a dramatic mood for the piece. Commas are used especially to create a fluid reading and heightens the drama as detail is added to detail in describing Dorian’s reaction and interpretation of his self-portrait. For example, when he realizes how he shall grow old and the painting remain youthful, commas divide the aging process which he imagines for himself into parts; “his face would be wrinkled and wizen, his eyes dim and colorless, the grace of his figure broken.. the scarlet would pass away from his lips, and the gold steal from his hair… He would become dreadful, hideous and uncouth.” Commas allow for more details, more graphic adjectives such as these to be added into single sentences. This allows the reader to understand better the overwhelming depression that Dorian feels brought on by the idea of growing old.
These lengthy sentences with all their detail are interrupted on occasion by short, poignant sentences such as when Oscar Wilde is telling us of how the sense of Dorian’s beauty “came on him like a revelation”, and this is interrupted with, “He had never felt it before.” Or how when Dorian’s reaction to Basil’s flattery is being described; “He had listened to them, laughed at them, forget them,” this is an example of how the young man is not only being overwhelmed with his own beauty, but also by the voices of his friends; the short sentence, “They had not influenced his nature,” interrupts this overbearing train of thought. Short, poignant sentences in this extract add to the drama and achieve an affect “like a knife,” in that they stab right into the flow of narrative, and give the reader a chance to inhale before plunging back into the sensory descriptiveness (e.g. “the scarlet lips, golden hair, hand of ice”) of the passage.
The grammar is well suited to this kind of story, set in London’s high society neighborhoods. The descriptions, again, make use of strong, romantic adjectives, which a writer in this period would be likely to use. For example, instead of just saying, “Dorian’s eye’s filled with blue tears” the writer instead says, “His eyes deepened into amethyst,” this has a far more vivid effect, especially within the context of the setting. Other words such as “uncouth, listlessly, and panegyric” describe the text well, but they are also words which you might expect to find in Dorian’s vocabulary because he is a young aristocrat. The application of certain grammar to the character of Lord Henry is also appropriate. He speaks in a very pompous, bloated, overly-grand sort of way; as he might be expected to do considering his position. An example of this is when he says, “It is one of the greatest things in modern art,” which most likely is a exaggerated compliment.