2 The following passage describes the writer’s relationship with his father.
(a) Comment on the style and language of the passage. [15]
The piece is an imaginative one, possibly extracted from the autobiography of the writer. The fact that his tone is personal and confidential supports this claim. In the extract, the writer seeks to recount some of the last moments he had with his father and to describe their relationship. He accomplishes this by using parallelism in his descriptions, and his father’s suitcase as an allegory for the relationship that existed between himself and his father.
In the extract, the writer weaves descriptions of his father and himself together, contrasting and comparing both. To this end he avoids visual descriptions and prefers focusing on detailing their character traits, and mannerisms. Both prefer to avoid “feeling too much sorrow. His father, the writer says “had no wish to endure hardship”. This is probably true of the son as well. The irony in this is that they have subsequently landed themselves in a sorrowful, superficial, and ‘trivial’ relationship. It is sad because they cannot truly connect. The cause of this is demonstrated by the father who “assumed his usual jocular, mocking air”. This is how the son knows his father. However, the use of the verb ‘assume’ indicates that this is not how his father really is; instead he has put on this trait as a facade. As the writer reveals in the sixth paragraph the father is “acting”, and tragically it is a “precaution” to ward off any awkwardness between them – this is indicative of the delicate and superficial father-son relationship. They have their “usual roles” that each must play in order to remain in comfortable fellowship.
In fact, it is a “shaming moment” for either of them to break character. To show weakness, or empathy, as demonstrated by the father’s wandering around his son’s study, is unacceptable. Thus their tragic fact about their relationship creates a macabre mood for much of the extract. Showing how the father comes to his son “slightly embarrassed”, the writer describes his father surrendering his suitcase full of notebooks over to him. Metaphorically, the father is extending a hand of friendship toward his son, a plea for genuine connectedness to exist between them. His use of the word “maybe” causes the reader to take pity in him.
Furthermore, the suitcase is a symbol of their relationship. It is a “painful burden” to their father, which shows why he is the first to reach out to his son – it weighs most heavily on him. Conversely, for the son the suitcase is a ‘friend’. It is a ‘powerful connection to his past’ and it was possibly his sole connection to his father. To him it is like a portal. His description of the “scents” and “things”, “cologne” and “foreign countries” illustrate the esthetic depths of this connection. Again, this further emphasizes the tragedy, because rather than actually spend time with him, the son tries to acquaint himself with his father through the suitcase, his father’s occupation and belongings. The son begins to feel the weight of their relationship later on, however, when he refers to the suitcase and the “mysterious weight of its contents”. The use of the word ‘mysterious’ highlights that the son does not fully understand why his relationship with his father weighs so heavily on him. It also implies that he hasn’t opened the suitcase in years. This creates a suspenseful, dark, and foreboding mood for the proceeded segment.
The writer builds on this suspense by describing his ‘fear’ of what he might find in the suitcase. Once again, he will attempt to use the suitcase as a portal to connect with his father, only this time he’s afraid of it. This contrasts with how he used to “rush to open” the suitcase as a child. The reader is shown that the reason for this is that the writer is afraid his “father might be a good writer”. This presents the reader with a paradox, because at the same time the writer “wished to know what his father had written, what he had thought when” he was the age the writer is at this point. The writer thus, longs for a connection, but only so far as his father relates to him; he has no desire to be like his father. In fact, he has done everything in his power to be the opposite of his father. While his father had been a poet, the son became a writer (probably an academic dealing with mostly factual writing). He has pursued writing for twenty-five years whereas his father seemed to have given up writing. There are even minute differences such as the son possessing a “study” as apposed to his father’s portable “library”. All of this seems to stem from a bitter desire for vengeance, probably vengeance for his father’s failures; his failure as a father, his failure as a businessman and his “failure to take literature seriously”. Therefore the son does not take him seriously.
Ultimately, we see the converse parallelism in their relationship. But in the end, the son is shocked to discover his father’s “writerly voice”, a voice he does not recognize as his father’s, but one which he undoubtedly has deployed in his own writing; hence the use of the word “writerly” as apposed to “poet’s voice”, etc. He suspects that his father was not the same person, “might not have been his father” when he wrote. No doubt he wonders if that was the cause of the severing of their relationship. He may wonder if he contributed to the severing and if he was not really his father’s son when he wrote. He questions his “authenticity”. Thus we see the final comparison is between writing and a lack of authenticity. We also see through the parallelism demonstrated in the extract that, although they were both purposefully very unlike each other, both father and son were the same.